Monday, February 07, 2005

Making things rhyme

Theory of Negativity

It's the calm before the storm surrounds you
You're hiding but afraid that no one's found you
You can cry until your tears drown you
But what will it amount to?

You've spent years and years just waiting
Don't know what you're anticipating
You know you can't keep on hating
The mess that you're creating

It's all the same, but life's a game
You don't know how to play
And every morning gets more boring
'Cause every single day

You're living by a theory of negativity
It's hard to find any sympathy
When all that's left is honesty
'Cause everyone knows the truth's not pretty
But somehow you'll survive
Even though you feel you've been deprived
Of the things that make this world alive

You might think that there's nothing for us
Stuck in a song with no uplifting chorus
All the words, all the rhymes will bore us
Stir up the crowd, but they'll ignore us

You do everything with the wrong intentions
So what you've acheived isn't worth a mention
Go against the flow, ask for an exemption
But you can't earn that thing they call redemption

Nothing will satisfy
You're crying, craving to know why
The more you try to find the highs
The more all of the meaning dies

What do you do when truths are left unstated,
When smiles and tears are overrated?
The light at the end of the tunnel has faded
But when it's all over you still haven't made it...

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6 comments:

Andrew said...

Did you write that, or that a song?

Vivian said...

I wrote it.

(Hint: anything signed off by 16 question marks is mine)

(Actually, I don't think I've put anything up that isn't mine yet :p)

Minerva said...

hehe, I believe just the spam typed up by me are actually by someone else, other than you or me. *bwhahahaha*

Vivian said...

Huh?...I don't get you, Pun

Anonymous said...

can't be bothered signing in...

lol, I get the whole thing about the 16 question marks now. Took about half a day for it to sink in :)

at first i just thought you had a mental blank & didn't know how to finish it off!!! :)


-- trees

Catie said...

pun, i don't get you either.