Step inside the mind that finds you
Count the moments 'til your breakthrough
They pour down like rain
They float down the drain
What's come to pass is gone now
Are we playing the waiting game?
The more things change the more they stay the same
And now it's too late
Tied in with your fate
But you don't believe it somehow
This is not the way it ends
You're too afraid to look around the bend
Fight the way it feels
Is it too real?
You're standing here looking down
Climbing up the slope
Chain your mind to hope
Reach the start of each new day
End the darkness, light the way
So make the promise, take the vow
Can't really lose
Can't really choose
Anything else but heights are deep
Run the race before you can sleep
You're on show so take a bow
Hear the applause
They've opened the doors
No longer is the way unguided
No longer are we undecided
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oh ooops, yeah, i started it in the morning, saved it, and then posted it in the afternoon, must've forgotten to change the am/pm thing. Will do so now.
Will also be lazy now as have just done two exams today...pharmacokinetics was horrible!! boohoo, i'm gonna cry...
And rhyming isn't that hard if you know your alphabet!
Have you tried reading it from the bottom line up yet? :)
oh, poor viv :( well, 2 exams gone now right?
i had one today, but it wasn't that bad...
i didn't think to read it that way up... the whole 'which way is up?' thing didn't really kick in.
I like the way you've given it to us better. It ends more positively! :D
well, another way to look at it is to start from either end and just stop in the middle....then you don't get the rhyming pattern reversing and stuff.
I dunno, the whole thing doesn't make a lot of sense, just a bunch of words....but yes, there is a *change of mood* at the midpoint :)(is there a fancy/nerdy English term for that?)
Cat should know, O English -studying one :)
why would i know that? just because i am writing an essay on poetry at the moment... it is old english though, so it's different right?
I'm so sorry Viv, when I was chatting to you on the phone, I thought it was 1745, but it was really 1645. I'm sorry, you coulda joined us but.. sorry, I thought really thought it was 1745. Sorry, sorry, I really was mistaken. We didn't do much after just chased down the bus and went to Kinokuniya then went home/Lilyfield. Sorry Viv, I really thought it was 1745, feel very free to kick me next time you see me, or give me a virtual kick.
shouldn't you rub feet in anticipation trees?
It's alright, i thought you had gotten the time wrong, but I was having coffee with uni friends anyways, and then went on a sheet music shoppng spree at Dymocks :)
So since I don't feel like virtually kicking Pun, I guess Trees can :P
Yes I did....how did you guess? :p
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